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August 18, 2007

Do Mini Research & Add Pizzazz to Your Fiction

Spice Up Your Stories ~ Add Some Foreign Flare

As writers, it is our job to wow our readers and to offer them a respite from their everyday, often very drab, lives by providing them with a new world or moment to explore through our fiction. Novel writing aside (and yes, I've put it aside again to embrace writing more short fiction), it is even more important for us short fiction writers to hone our skills in creating scenarios where our readers can glean a glimpse of what it would be like to live or work someplace else or to be someone else. This means we have to be consciously aware of creating characters outside the norm or the average person. We have to move away from the average setting, the average accouterments of the stereotypical livelihood, residence, family life, etc., and offer readers a new experience.

For instance, if I'm writing for a publication that is mainly sold in the US, I might set my story in Europe, Russia, the Mediterranean, South Africa, Australia. I might write about a character with a profession or problem unique to that local, and I would sprinkle in terminology of that location, to enhance my reader's experience. I'm sure you get the picture.

Unfortunately, as a reader, I most often encounter short stories that might possess a unique plot but feature mundane locales and a typical main character that could be even me.

While these stories are indeed getting published, they lack the wow power for me as a reader. So as a writer, now one who is delving into short works, I've challenged myself to stretch my story ideas into new directions. I spice things up as I mentioned above. While this is proving fun, it is also proving to have its own unique challenge because one can not just fall back on settings and information I've gained from watching movies, TV, or my travel experience to make my 'new settings and characters' come alive to my readers. Nor can I, or any other writer I know, jet right over to the location we want to write about. And there's where the mini research comes in.

being a natural-born and quite avid procrastinator, I've spend not hours but months honing my skill at snooping around the Web for pictures and information on the places or things I want to write about. I've also obtain quite a few Writer's Digest books on Places, Careers, and Lingo.

What's also nice about this compilation of resources I now have at my fingertips and in my 'Favorites' folder is that they are also useful in my novel writing.

For short stories though, you don't need much. You don't want to inundate readers with too much mumbo-jumbo and foreign words, names or places. They'll get distracted from the story and you'll failed to maintain their interest ~ as well as the interest of an editor.

Great References Books Must Haves:

Writer's Guide to Places by Don Prues and Jack Heffron, features places in North America & Canada

Eyewitness Travel Guide to Europe by Dan Colwell, a marvelous inside look at cities and provinces in 20 European countries, with color and aerial photos, maps, etc.

Careers for your Characters by Raymond Obstfeld, features information and jargon of 101 professions from Architecture to Zookeeper.
 

 


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April 15, 2007

Two Stories Completed

For me, Mr. Procrastinator Extraordinare, producing anything in its entirety is a coup. So completing two--yes, two!--short stories in a month’s time is a feat beyond belief for me. I hadn’t written a complete short story in so long, I thought I had forgotten how. My wife still shuffles around the house in her bunny slippers with a look of amazement on her face. My kids bounced up and down and clapped their hands, crowing ‘You did it Daddy!" over an over again, which made me feel like a movie star who was about to accept an Oscar or some other award.

But I did it.

With the use of my new, handy-dandy Write It Now software I actually outlined, plotted and wrote two entirely complete tales. Marketable tales mind you. Not merely rough drafts. I did those too. It took me about a week of outlining and brainstorming to plot out each story, then another week each to draft out the story. By then, I was needing some time away from the tight confines of my tiny broom closet work space, so I took a week off. I read some AlienSkin submissions, watched some god-awful movies on TV. I surfed the net for mindless stuff, like bikini babes, beauties in the wild, beauties in lace on linen, etc. That kind of stuff. I took the wife to dinner. Took the kids to Chuckie Cheese and to a cartoon movie at the Cineplex. I snoozed, ate junk food, downed a Yingling or two . . . or three.

Then I got the urge to write again. Yep, I did. It wasn’t THE urge to work on the novel again, but it was a urge to revisit the two short stories I had recently whipped up. So I slipped back into my closet, tapped my pinup girl on the fanny as I closed the closet door, and I pulled up the first story. I reread it, made some edits, formatted it and moved it out of my Work-In-Progress folder to my newly created Short Story folder. Finito.

Story two took three days to revamp and complete. But it too advanced to the new folder.

One story weighed in at 1,000 words exactly and the other breached 1,500 words. Not novella lengths by any means. But they mean I can scan the markets and get my name out there before editors again. Wahoo.

I’ll let you know how it goes once I send them out to markets this week.


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